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PostSubject: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Mon Jul 30, 2012 11:54 pm

It's a Shakespearian sonnet (strict pentameter/rhyme scheme/ 14 lines)

I wrote it a while ago and didn't know what to name it, so i didn't. Haha.


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Your beauty is like a flowering field

Not just any, but the purple no less,

Where the roses bloom their glorious build

And the birds rejoice in eternal recess.

The sugary scents, intoxicating

No more less than the beauty induces.

Rainbows take form from the heavens reasoning -

Its maker too far to see his missus.

Then fall does take hold its tactic, a gird

That withers the flowers, the grasses, the trees.

their carnation unheard by the blaise birds

whom migrate just as the fields has no fees.

not faltering in wants, he closes in

consoling in ways unheard of, unseen.


Kinda corny, but you know.




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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Tue Jul 31, 2012 8:20 am

fuck them birds nigga, for not giving a shit about the field they blessed to play in
good poem, i liked it! you've got amazing imagination and excellent diction :)
and very convenient that you give the untitled clan an untitled poem lol
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:52 am

oh props
I didn't think you would post it
wd gz
for those that dun know fipp gets all the ladies
too bad ror isn't around much, I think he would enjoy your poetry

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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Tue Jul 31, 2012 12:02 pm

Windrider wrote:
for those that dun know fipp gets all the ladies

pssh, naw. this young blood aint get none since he dont listen for those synced up beats of the heart
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Tue Jul 31, 2012 4:06 pm

Heh i promised i would xD

Thx for the good vibes mates
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Wed Aug 01, 2012 1:12 am

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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:45 am

Posting poems,,,, i guess here's mine...

Same rules as Fipps but not as good....

Shakespearian sonnet; etcetcetc.

Mines about the show, "The walking dead"


Prologue Assignment
Tim Gallagher
February 13, 2012

“Walking Dead”

The story starts off with a deadly bang
A foray of risk, running, and danger;
The walkers surged forward in a big gang.
Only the protection of a ranger
A group forced to flee constricted by fear
The country they go, deprived of all hope.
No understanding, God’s silence they hear
Starved of weapons; they learn they cannot cope
They are forced to return to the city;
Obligated to return to the dead.
The lives of lost ones cause endless pity
Death reaped sorrow, pain, ravenously fed.
Continues the story, entrancing one
Infinite options drives the mind to run.


Yeah I got a 50 on it
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OUTTA FIFTY SMH MARSH <3




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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:57 am

That was sexy Giffy :D. Your teacher made you write sonnets too?

/msg marsh heehee 50/150
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:45 am

if i watched the show id prolly understand it better, but i get the concept.
pretty good gftis, but doesnt cia have better things to do?
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 10:04 am

no no the cia only monitors that which is not important doncha know
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 10:08 am

oh? makes sense
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 10:44 am

our tax dollars at work yo
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 11:19 am

cia summer jobs noobs
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:05 pm

Gftis wrote:
cia summer jobs noobs
cause that makes sense
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:40 pm

i actually agree with marsh on this one
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:56 am

haha pre is just scared to post the poem he wrote :>

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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Fri Aug 03, 2012 1:54 pm

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Wind is a nab
And so ~R~ ~'U!
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:03 pm

Number3 wrote:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Wind is a nab
And so ~R~ ~'U!

best poem ever. someone give this man a towel
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PostSubject: Re: Heh - the poem i promised, Wind & Marsh   Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:45 pm

*sexybeast gives a towel to number3*
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